my idol

My idol

Tell about my idol, I have a favorite singer but it’s not for all. In fact, I have many favorite Idol and singer. Some of my idol as singer are Justin Bieber ,Taio Crush ,Jason Mraz and I have Idol from my own country, Indonesia. In my country I have idol as singer too are Afgan Syahreza ,Vidi Aldiano ,and etc.
Now, I want to tell you about some of my idol and first, I’m going to tell you about Justin Bieber.

Justin is a Canadian as great singer but before it, Justin just a civil person who had multy talent likes can playing guitar, playing piano, dancing, and sing a song too. He’s become like now it’s because helped of a famous singer too from American and he is Usher.
Justin had a good voice when he singing on the stage and he sing a song with great dancing and always he is performing on the stage, Justin always watched of many people are teen, woman and man too. Many people said Justin as “ next Jecko ” because he is attractive on stage , had a great voice ,can do dancing well , and etc.
In lately ,Justin made a documentary film about himself it’s story about his life before as singer, video when he was child in Canada and etc. this film was started on February,14th 2011 in America and was invited many famous people likes Usher, Janet Smith, Sean Kingstone and etc.
Justin had a good face nd because his face, many teen love him and had a biggest dream who want to be his wife or can dating with Justin although in a few hour.
And I’m going to tell you about my idol from my country, Indonesia. A young good singer is Afgan Syahreza, he have a great voice too same like Justin Bieber and he had a good face and good smily. Afgan had many fan’s likes teen too but his fan’s majority at Indonesia, Malaysian , and around Asian .

Strong point about my essay is :
I wrote many information about my idol and I was write it as maximal as I can do it well, and I was told you about singer from Indonesian can do sing a song as well as western singer.
And weak point about my essay is :
I don’t know well in my mistake but I’m sorry about my mistake because I still learning in English and I make mistake in punctuation of my essay.